So the latest draft of Fly Girl is out to two more readers. One of them has already confirmed my big fear: NOT ENOUGH CONFLICT. Arggghhh! This is a problem I’ve been trying to solve in the last revisions. Obviously, I’ve still got a ways to go. I’d happily add a new plot twist or character — if I could think of one! That’s where I’m at — a road block. Fellow writers — any tips?!